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[ActionScript Tutorial v1]

o.0

This just looks like you did copy/paste from other tutorials, which would be plagiarism.

A good tutorial doesn't just say "Here is final result", it shows how one would make the final result an explains what every part of it means.

ZiggyZack99 responds:

i didn't plag!
this isn't a good tut!

[Hectic]

i have a few suggestions

1) Instead of considering clicking cheating, put a hitTest script on the movieclip followint he mouse

2) Increase the framerate to around 30 to make things look very smooth and make it harder to cheat (although u will ahve to redo the levels to make things match the new framerate)

Its a great concept, just needs improvment (although this is kinda like mouse avoider)

chillyphilly responds:

yeah...I was going to increase the frame rate to that but when i did it made the bombs so incredibly fast and it made it impossible. And it would take a very long time to correct so i couldnt be bothered. But i might another time.

[AntiEbaums Tutorial]

Meh.

Not too well made (graphics and such) but it serves its purpose.

One problem is that ebaums world edits the movies to be put on their website so they can avoid things like this(and get their name in it.)

influensi responds:

Actually, the process of decompiling a swf file, inserting a logo, finding and removing a few lines of actionscript which can be easily buried under several hundred layers of nonsense, all just to fake their name is too much for eBaum's. They don't edit flash, only videos and images. Besides, the time they would spend actually doing this is money lost for them, so a victory for us either way.

[Are You A Noob?]

One thing

It's more fun to say ASS instead of SSA

axeman666 responds:

lol

[NG tutorial 1.01]

2 things

1) Put in a section on movie awards and a section on the audio portal.

2) Fix the sound (it starts again when u enter the main menu, but the first oen doenst stop{both play at same time!!!})

maxc16 responds:

Thanks for the review. Yes, the sound was a big problem for me. I didn't know how to fix it so I just put a stop sounds button. Thankyou fdor the suggestion about movie awards, I will put it in in an update. There is an audio section.

[Bush Blaster]

Dude

I know there is freedom of speech and stuff, but seriously, enough bush bashing is enough.

fungus-shark408 responds:

You know, in actuality (this is for alot of you) I DON'T hate Bush at that much... In fact, I'm not even old enough to vote/have much of a political view.

[SimSynthesizer v1.1]

Hmm....

It would be helpful if you could also click the keys instead of having to use your keyboard, cause the keys get confusing.

zipperdeaf responds:

if you clicked em you could only do 1 at a time and it be too hard to play anything

[Beginner Tutorial .1]

AHHH

PLEASE EVERYONE! NO MORE TUTORIALS!

Olly responds:

if you dont like them dont watch, review o vote on them and you will happy

[Cath the rings (Mic game)]

Good

but you're screwed if u dont have a mic (luckily i do)

Ninja-chicken responds:

yeah but then they are poor tramps who suck so it doesnt matter